Do
you belong to a writer's group? You do? Congratulations! It's essential to the
process of growing as a writer, of honing your skills, of becoming an ace at
the craft. By joining one, you've taken a major step in your career.
But here's a question: is your group a critique
group? Or a chorus of cheerleaders?
We all need cheerleaders. Pom-poms and rah-rahs.
Undying support from someone—anyone—that we can latch onto in those dark
moments when the blank page seems the hardest thing to face; when your words,
once sheer genius, have begun to look like so much crap. Ordinary crap, at
that.
We need cheerleaders to help us believe we
can do this thing, that we have it in us, that our talent exists, that our
writing is not ordinary.
If your goal is not only to get published, but to grow
as a writer, to become the best writer you can be, you also need a
helping hand in terms of craft. I know—you've read the books, you have an MFA
from a prestigious program, you've been doing this for a long time. Hell, for
all I know, you're Stephen King or JRR Tolkien. Whatever. If you're committed
to this career, you want to be better. Write better.
Right?
Cheerleading is for the spirit. It's to keep you
sane, focused, motivated. But it won't improve your writing. Unless it's
balanced against objective critiques, it may even damage it.
What is the function of a good critique
group? To improve your writing. How? By providing a bunch of objective opinions
on it—what works, what doesn't. Suggestions on how to make a scene more alive,
give a character depth, draw the reader into the narrative to the point where
they cannot put the book down. A critique group is the foundry where your skill
is tempered into cutting-edge precision. Like iron ore, you need to be smelted
and continuously honed into the hardness of brilliance.
What a critique group is not: a cheerleader
faction for your work. A support group? Certainly, when it comes to true
improvement. Like AA, your critiquing partners shouldn't encourage you to hit
the bourbon no matter how desperately you think you need it, but rather push
you—hard—to stick on the right path, to rise above yourself. A good critique
partner will tell you the hard truths you need to hear—and listen to—in order
to take your writing to the next level.
A critique group is like your editor—but careful
here: not your spellcheck. You wouldn't send a first draft to your
editor, right? You'd check for misspelled words, for echoes, for repetitious
scenes, for character and plot arcs. When it's as good as you can make it, and
only then, you'd send it out.
And then your editor would come back with
suggestions and remarks, and you'd start work on your final draft.
Revise your expectations: a critique group should
get your writing as good as you can get it in order to help you improve
it. A rah-rah might feel great, but how much does it help, really?
When you join a critique group, you leave your ego
at the door. You bring only your story. It's all about the story, about
making it better, making it shine.
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including an honorable mention in Clarity of Night’s contest in July 2011 (http://clarityofnight.blogspot.com/2011/07/entry-97.html).