O is for Optician. (Skim to the underlined genre or style that
best suits you.)
The eyes are windows to
the soul, or heart (when you’re writing Romance).
And who has the right to get super up-close and personal to your eyes? Your
optician. So now you know your hero is going for an eye check-up. The new
optician is pretty in more ways than her luscious brown eyes. Her sense of
humor gets a glowing review, too, because as soon as he starts worming his way
around the question–are you single–she smiles and inquires instead, So, how many people in your family have
glaucoma? She lets him sweat a second before she smiles and says, Don’t worry. It’s not looking like you’re
going to be the first. After that humorous little ice chipper, your hero is
determined to get more than just another appointment for his next eye exam.
With any luck, he’ll have her number.
Now you have how they
met. You know they both have a sense of humor. So now you just have to add a
few mishaps or misunderstandings, or some bigger obstacle, and watch how clear
their vision is in the end when they realize that they could never be with
anyone else.
Mystery
writers, it isn’t the butler who did it. It’s the optician. And guess how? A
little substance of something to add a clear coating to the victim’s contact
lenses. And going by the estimated time of death, it had to have been done
during the victim’s eye exam earlier today. But your sleuth is wondering if
that might be too simple. Maybe somebody wants it to look like the optician did
it. True, he was having an affair with the victim, and he might have wanted out
of it. Divorces can be quite costly and not timely when you’re starting a new practice
of your own. So what about his wife? Nothing like the scorn of a jealous woman.
But she’s on a Carnival cruise on her way to the Bahamas. Did she hire someone
for murder and frame her husband? Their daughter is only twelve years old.
Surely she didn’t …
You really won’t know who did it until you start writing.
The more you get to know these people and the other people in their lives, the
easier it’ll be to figure out whodunit. Remember to make sure the characters
have some tie in with your sleuth or main character to create a strong
motivation to solve the crime.
It’s a Literary tale when the longtime
optician finally learns what real sight actually means. For this story, the eye
examinations Nelson gives are secondary to the examination he trips through in
his own life, but it is that close examination, both outside of him and inside,
that will give insights for this story. What does Nelson see when he’s
examining the eyes of another? He will see more than pupils and irises and
retinas. What will he see when he looks in the mirror at his own eyes? What do
these realizations mean in relation to his understanding of the human
condition? That should give you a jumping off point, an idea to work with, and
now you can shape it into the lyrical prose that lovers of literary stories
can’t resist.
It could be an
entertaining and informational story for Children
if you take your little character, bunny or child, to an optician for the first
time. Everything the child will see and experience will be brand new to him or
her. It might be a little scary too. I’m never too keen on it when the doctor
brings that goggle-like machine up close to my face. But to a child, this trip
will prove exciting, and getting a first pair of glasses, with frames in his
favorite color, can be exciting, too. My daughter needed a story like this when
she was young, because she did not want glasses at all. A positive story making
wearing glasses a thing of style and wonder would’ve been good to have in my
mother’s tool bag.